Posts Tagged ‘Guerra’

New GUERRA Excerpt

Friday, July 3rd, 2009

A new excerpt from my current work-in-progress GUERRA for you all to check out and comment on …

And that night, somewhere amongst gel-filtered spotlights, designer drugs and the heartbeat of Russian breakbeats, the infection begins.

Erika Sørensen smiles as the man who has been flirting with her for half an hour or so arrives at a private booth with her drink refilled. She touches him casually as they talk and slowly, with social engineering skills carefully honed during her time as a hacker, she guides the conversation towards the discovery of Roisin Kennedy’s body and the BLAST group. She tells him of a friend of a friend who is involved in the investigation and knows for a fact that BLAST have been inactive for 15 years. She shrugs when he asks her what this might mean and leaves him to gestate his own theories.

A few hours later and she’s back at his place pretending to get as high as him and his friends and they’re in full conspiratorial flow, refracting theories off of one another, letting their natural paranoia blossom. She listens as the ideas are gradually sculpted, taking shape from their insecurities and prejudices, only joining in herself when she feels the integrity of the meme are under threat.

Simultaneously, Göran Priske is in a high-class cocktail club located, at least for this weekend, in a bunker-like structure far up the hillsides. The roof is curved and almost entirely made of glass, a row of bulky telescopes prodding through gaps in the structure.

Some of those gathered are sitting in the metal-framed chairs peering up towards the stars but most are slouched in the leather sofas that are scattered around the place. Moulded plastic tables house half-drained cups of imported espresso.

Göran has spent several hours tracking the conversations of the attendees and delivers a few choice comments at selected moments to one group after another. His touches are more deft than Erika’s, subtle enough that the subject of the murdered girl and BLAST barely come up, but he knows that the seeds have been sown and within a day the meme will be solidly lodged in their brains. He also knows that several of those he talks to have contacts in the pirate broadcasting community, others cool hunters for some of the marketing corporations based on the south side.

And Olof Krøldrup, earlier in the evening hanging out in a parking lot with street racers checking out the latest modifications to each other’s cars and delivering smoothly-package thought-bombs to the most influential amongst them, has joined Göran at the observatory. Göran’s initial seeding already placed, Olof almost imperceptibly reinforces the meme, often with little more than a nod of agreement to let someone know that their ideas have support or to guide them elsewhere when they are starting to stray. He spends some time with the agent of the model Mariana Quesada, having to adjust his language slightly when the man’s libertarian leanings become clear.

At sunrise Erika slips out of the apartment and at the same time Olof and Göran leave the observatory party, their work complete for now but the effects only just starting to build.

The man who brought Erika home emerges from his drug haze with the conspiracy theories still rattling around in his head and relates them to work colleagues at an expenses-paid lunch the next day. Three out of the five there return home and tell their partners and flatmates about the man’s ideas. Of those three, two repeat the gesture with their own friends and colleagues.

One of the cool hunters from the observatory writes up a report on the emerging trend for support for animal rights causes and specifically mentions BLAST. This is passed to the marketing directors of several firms that hire the hunters and the promotional campaigns for dozens of products are instantly adjusted.

The DJ that runs the decks at the observatory requests cuts from the news reports from a pirate friend of his to include as samples on some new tracks he is working on. The pirate is puzzled at how little material he can find without going back fifteen years and relates this to several other members of his crew.

And so two becomes four becomes sixteen becomes two-hundred and fifty-six.

The messages warps and changes but it travels and that, like a virus that only cares that it finds some host, any host, is all that matters.

New GUERRA excerpt added

Tuesday, December 30th, 2008

For those of you interested in finding out more about the next n*vel that I’ve been working on for the last 14 months or so, you can now read a new excerpt from GUERRA.

A n*vel about a city of warring pirate broadcasters, GUERRA follows the man of the title as he wages a meme battle against unknown forces who are responsible for the death of an ex-lover.  Over the course of the story he comes across deviant celebrity obsessed glitter journalists, rogue ambulancemen who steal bodies and sell them on the black market, illegal dog fighters and breeders, energy barons and psychotic religious cults.

The excerpt is a scene from early on in the n*vel where Guerra returns for help to another ex-lover of his, a SWAT trooper who is dying from a type of tumour that is affecting people across the city …

You can read the piece here.

Writing Update for Early October

Thursday, October 2nd, 2008

I’m into the home stretch of Guerra now with only another 10,000 words or so still to go.

I’m still not exactly sure what is going to happen at the end, the idea that I’ve had since the story’s inception is starting to move away from me now.  For the time being I’m sketching out only the next chapter or two at a time and I’ll see how things develop in regards to where it goes.

There are still a few chunks that I missed out earlier in the story which I’ll need to go back and complete which will probably account for another 5-10K or so which will mean the first draft should end up at around a fairly neat 100,000 words - almost exactly the same as Pretty Little Things To Fill Up The Void.

Writing Update for August 2008

Monday, August 18th, 2008

Work continues apace on GUERRA, got the first draft to around 75,000 words and in the final stretch now.

It is wierd to think that after Freya Rose was born I managed to write 30,000 words in about 7 or 8 weeks and in the many months that followed have only just managed to match that over the entire time - I’m still not sure how I managed to write an average of 20,000 words a week when I was writing from 12am to 3am most nights in between baby feeds but perhaps the regularity helps.

I’m continuing to push ahead with it though and am enjoying writing the story loads which is a good sign at least.  I don’t think there will be a huge amount of work for draft two but I plan on putting the work aside for a month or so once draft one is done (aiming to get this done by my birthday in November) then revising it.

Other than that I have several short story ideas which I need to flesh out a little more before writing but with time as limited as it is just now I’m tending to focus on the n*vel length stuff, at least for the time being.


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