Posts Tagged ‘Writing Updates’

New GUERRA Excerpt

Friday, July 3rd, 2009

A new excerpt from my current work-in-progress GUERRA for you all to check out and comment on …

And that night, somewhere amongst gel-filtered spotlights, designer drugs and the heartbeat of Russian breakbeats, the infection begins.

Erika Sørensen smiles as the man who has been flirting with her for half an hour or so arrives at a private booth with her drink refilled. She touches him casually as they talk and slowly, with social engineering skills carefully honed during her time as a hacker, she guides the conversation towards the discovery of Roisin Kennedy’s body and the BLAST group. She tells him of a friend of a friend who is involved in the investigation and knows for a fact that BLAST have been inactive for 15 years. She shrugs when he asks her what this might mean and leaves him to gestate his own theories.

A few hours later and she’s back at his place pretending to get as high as him and his friends and they’re in full conspiratorial flow, refracting theories off of one another, letting their natural paranoia blossom. She listens as the ideas are gradually sculpted, taking shape from their insecurities and prejudices, only joining in herself when she feels the integrity of the meme are under threat.

Simultaneously, Göran Priske is in a high-class cocktail club located, at least for this weekend, in a bunker-like structure far up the hillsides. The roof is curved and almost entirely made of glass, a row of bulky telescopes prodding through gaps in the structure.

Some of those gathered are sitting in the metal-framed chairs peering up towards the stars but most are slouched in the leather sofas that are scattered around the place. Moulded plastic tables house half-drained cups of imported espresso.

Göran has spent several hours tracking the conversations of the attendees and delivers a few choice comments at selected moments to one group after another. His touches are more deft than Erika’s, subtle enough that the subject of the murdered girl and BLAST barely come up, but he knows that the seeds have been sown and within a day the meme will be solidly lodged in their brains. He also knows that several of those he talks to have contacts in the pirate broadcasting community, others cool hunters for some of the marketing corporations based on the south side.

And Olof Krøldrup, earlier in the evening hanging out in a parking lot with street racers checking out the latest modifications to each other’s cars and delivering smoothly-package thought-bombs to the most influential amongst them, has joined Göran at the observatory. Göran’s initial seeding already placed, Olof almost imperceptibly reinforces the meme, often with little more than a nod of agreement to let someone know that their ideas have support or to guide them elsewhere when they are starting to stray. He spends some time with the agent of the model Mariana Quesada, having to adjust his language slightly when the man’s libertarian leanings become clear.

At sunrise Erika slips out of the apartment and at the same time Olof and Göran leave the observatory party, their work complete for now but the effects only just starting to build.

The man who brought Erika home emerges from his drug haze with the conspiracy theories still rattling around in his head and relates them to work colleagues at an expenses-paid lunch the next day. Three out of the five there return home and tell their partners and flatmates about the man’s ideas. Of those three, two repeat the gesture with their own friends and colleagues.

One of the cool hunters from the observatory writes up a report on the emerging trend for support for animal rights causes and specifically mentions BLAST. This is passed to the marketing directors of several firms that hire the hunters and the promotional campaigns for dozens of products are instantly adjusted.

The DJ that runs the decks at the observatory requests cuts from the news reports from a pirate friend of his to include as samples on some new tracks he is working on. The pirate is puzzled at how little material he can find without going back fifteen years and relates this to several other members of his crew.

And so two becomes four becomes sixteen becomes two-hundred and fifty-six.

The messages warps and changes but it travels and that, like a virus that only cares that it finds some host, any host, is all that matters.

Writing Updates

Thursday, February 12th, 2009

Received another rejection, this one from Interfictions who passed on my story The Sky And The Lights so I’ll need to keep an eye out for another home for that one.  It was the story I wrote for Jeff Vandermeer’s pirate anthology and I do wonder if there are still a lot of pirate stories floating around out there looking for a home …

I’ve sent out new submission, minus blindfold heading out to Time’s Edge.  Still not sure if it’s not genre enough but I’m about halfway through a second story for that, as yet untitled.

I added another few thousand words to Guerra last night as well so it’s just over 95K at the moment.  I’d like to reach the magic 100K by the end of the month but will see how it goes as I’m still not exactly sure how it’s all going to end.  If I still can’t figure it out once I reach the end of the parts I’ve plotted then there’s enough bits I need to go back for to add in that will keep it all flowing.

Will be adding new excerpts to the site over the next few days so keep an eye out …

Rejection Received & Another Time Travel Story

Monday, February 2nd, 2009

Heard back from the editor/publisher of the proposed THOUGHTCRIME EXPERIMENT anthology today to say that he was passing on AND THEY WILL NOT BE STOPPED, the scifi story originally accepted for publication in the 2050 anthology that vanished without trace.  He did offer to send me some critique for the piece so I might take him up on it. 

He also said that if I wanted to send him something else with a lighter tone to it he’d be eager to see it.  I had to tell him that I didn’t really do light-toned stories …

On the writing front apart from finally getting back to work on Guerra, adding a couple of K to it, I’ve also been considering starting on another time travel story with a view to having it as backup for the Time’s Edge antho.

I’m a little concerned that the first one I wrote for it, minus blindfold, might not be genre enough for it and I’ve been toying with another idea and that is to do with time travel via chemicals which basically open up the doors to your perception rather than anything technological.  I have sketched out the basic premise and whilst it is more scifi it is certainly still a very “Logan” story, whatever that might be…

Magazines Vs Anthologies

Monday, February 2nd, 2009

For the most part I generally submit what short stories I write to anthologies since there’s something about the more hefty physical product of a book that raises it above magazines or, particularly, webzines - but I think I might now be about to change my approach.

There have been more than a few occasions now that I’ve had a story accepted for an anthology that has never seen print - for reasons explained or for no reason at all (2050) - so I’m begining to look more favouraby at pro markets both in print and online.

 Certainly in the last few years the importance of webzines has gone up so getting a story published in Clarkesworld is a far better option than getting it done in an anthology that nobody will ever see or might not make it to print.  (That and the cash they pay is better which means it’s harder to get in to which means more rewards when/if I DO get in …)

So my plan is to research a few of the better ones and send off what few stories I have available to them and see where it goes.  With the exchange rate the way it is a few hundred bucks could go a long way …

A Lynchian Effort

Tuesday, January 27th, 2009

Just finished the first draft of another short story, which I’ve titled minus blindfold (yes another one I’m naming after a Deftones song…) which I think I’m going to submit to the Time’s Edge anthology to be put out by Utility Fog Press.

I’m not exactly sure how I feel about it at the moment but I wanted to try and do something quite Lynchian since I’ve recently re-watched Inland Empire and a couple of his other movies and am as in love with his style/method as ever.  That is the danger, of course, and part of my hesitance to go through with the idea - I don’t think it’s ever a good grounding for someone to create something out of their love for someone else’s work as the danger is it becomes a hackjob.

Because of the nature of the story I simultaneously made it up as I went along but also kept going back and revising.  Rather than a plot it was like I had six or seven concepts or objects/scenes floating around in the air above my head and just let them drift down when it felt right.  Halfway through I wasn’t sure how to hook it all up but it worked out in the end.

I’m not sure if it’s maybe too slipstreamy for them and doesn’t have enough genre content but we’ll see.  I’ll give it a once-over then send it off to them before the end of the week.


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